Q1. What were the aims of the script & 9 key frames?
The purpose for the script is to create either a squeal or prequel, disruption or resolution scene of a previous indie film. In my case i made a disruption scene for a prequel to SKET. The script shows my MACRO of the representation of masculinity in women and what particular techniques are used, such costumes, props and juxtaposition between characters. I represented the masculinity of women in my 9 key frames by having my two actress be as different as possible (masculinity whys) to show the juxtaposition between the two characters. The key frames then go on to show a transformation in the more feminine character to show her developing her masculinity. I show this transformation via a montage of the masculine character "Stacy" training the initially more feminine character "Danielle".
Q2. What codes and conventions identified in the textual analysis essay were used in the script & 9 key frames?
I used the conventions that were originally used through out SKET, which were conventions of violence and the conventions of south london stereotypes. I showed these particular conventions by dressing my characters in hoddies, joggers and other types of "south london" related attire. I also colour graded the frames to show the bleakness of the and mysterious vibe of the original crime genre. My location also came into this as i picked a slightly run down council house to portray the conventions of a crime movie and of to relate to previous conventions of the settings in the original movie.
Q3. How was the location report used in the construction of the 9 key frames?
My location report was a extremely influential part of my 9 key frames. The particular settings and locations that i chose were very important in in the terms of how i wanted to represent my characters in them. Seeing as my characters are supposed to be south london girls who are quite burly and hardy, so i decided to set my 9 key frames in a council house and made it look a bit more "urban". I did initially have to re-make my location report because when shooting day came around, the original location became un-available.
Q4. How successful was the script & 9 key frames in achieving the aims?
My script and 9 key frames were relatively successful in terms of how i wanted to convey my MACRO through them. I managed to do most of this through my cinematography and composition to represent masculinity via juxtaposition throughout the frames. I do feel that i could have represented my macro slightly better making the montage based around something violent to better represent masculinity and include more conventions of violence.
Q1.
ReplyDelete"(masculinity whys)"
BE MORE SPECIFIC IN THE AIM - TO EXPLORE YOUR CONCLUSION - (DETAIL WHAT THIS WAS)
Q2
"dressing my characters in hoddies, joggers and other types of "south london" related attire." - EXPLAIN WHY THIS IS ASSOCIATED AS MASCULINE AND HOW IT SHOWS HER TRANSFORMATION
Q3. "I did initially have to re-make my location report because when shooting day came around, the original location became un-available." DONT NEED THIS - REPLACE WITH A COMMENT ON HOW THE LOCATION SHOWS HER MASCULINISATION IS A PRODUCT OF HER ENVIRONMENT?
Q4. "I do feel that i could have represented my macro slightly better making the montage based around something violent to better represent masculinity and include more conventions of violence. " GIVE EXAMPLES OF SPECIFICS YOU WOULD DO DIFFERENTLY - NEED TO REVISIT AIMS (THE CONCLUSION OF YOUR TEXTUAL ANALYSIS ABOUT THE MASCULINISATION OF WOMEN)
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