Friday 7 March 2014

Shank (SKET Prequel) Pitch 2.0


Danielle has just found out that her father killed her mother (via visiting a police station to look into her mothers "mysterious" demise). She is walking home to find her father in the front room clasping a bottle of whisky/wine. An argument breaks out which results in her leaving home to stay with a friend of hers. in this transition of time. Her friend in juxtaposition is far more masculine than her, acting some what like Danielle does in the original movie. she acts like a sort of mentor (like Danielle is to Kay in Sket).

The 9 key frames will show the argument and all of the scenarios of which Danielle is put in making her more masculine over time. (E.g Her at a gym with her friend, or dressing more masculine)

  
Establishing shot
south London street, late afternoon, Danielle is on her way home from the police station after anxiously checking up on the recent case of her mothers demise 2 months ago, were she has just found out the cause of her mothers death was on account of her fathers drunken battery.

Danielle is in a state of fear and rage as she walks home from the police station to confront her father on what had happened to her mother. as she turns into the front door of her house barging open the door, and shouts to her dad on entry...

Danielle: DAAAAD!!??

*brief pause as Danielle scans the hall*

Danielle: DAAAADDD!!!??

It soon dawns on Danielle that her Father had left the house. so she then decides to go to her friend Stacy's house.

Cut to Stacy's house, and Danielle and Stacy are sitting in Stacy's room after Danielle had explained the situation and that she is lead to believe that her father had killed her mother. Stacy stands up and says..

Stacy: Look! your dad is a f***! ever since i first met 'im!

Danielle: What do i do!?

Stacy: i tell you what your going to do. your going to find him, and make him feel what your mum felt.

Danielle: But..But..i..

Stacy: No! im not having it! Your staying with me and first thin tomorrow im toughening you up!

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